YAY! I'm very, very happy today to be today's stop in the blog tour for The Twice-Loved Summer of Bluebell Jones by Susie Day! I do so adore Susie Day and now I adore both this book and Bluebell Jones! This book is very funny and heartfelt and I really hope that you'll read it.
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BUMPS IN THE ROAD - THE TWICE-LIVED BOOK OF SUSIE DAY
I wrote this book twice.
I don’t mean the usual rewrites that any published author will tell you about, with a weepy shudder; the first and second and third drafts before anyone even reads it, the edits, the other edits, the proofs and late tweaks.
I mean: I wrote this book twice. I wrote a book. Then I tore it up, and began again. New plot. New characters. New everything.
How did that happen? you ask. Because I’m rubbish! I reply, sort of joking. It is a bit uncomfortably close to the truth. I pitched my lovely, optimistic editor a single sentence - hopeless teenage girl gets to relive one year, and do it ‘better’ (with hilarious consequences!) - and she said yes. And then I wrote a spiralling pile of unamusing unambitious cack, which both she and I agreed should never be inflicted on anyone.
But really: how did that happen?
One: I listened too much. My first YA novel, Big Woo, was a book about teenage angst and internet personas - which was also a bit funny, and the main character had a boyfriend. Suddenly I thought I was meant to write books which were a bit funny, where the main character had a boyfriend. That’s not actually a plot.
Two: I was impatient. Books don’t arrive like delivery pizza. Ideas need slow cooking.
This one I began to write before I’d unpicked what it was really about - so I started in the wrong place. My main character, then called Poppy, wanted to ‘redo’ being 14 - so she used a magic digital camera (yes, I know, shut up) to scroll herself back through her gigantically-convenient-to-the-plot one-year-long film diary, and start over. Aside from the horror innate in the words MAGIC DIGITAL CAMERA, that’s never going to work as a book. Poppy already knows what happened in the original version of the year, but the reader doesn’t, so she has to recap/watch her MAGIC DIGITAL CAMERA FILM of the original version, then live the new different one, and... then do that again... and again... and...
Sorry, I briefly melted into a puddle of shame. (I wrote 50,000 words of this. It’s basically Jamie and the Magic Torch only with kissing and Topshop. 50,000 words!)
To my immense relief, rather than (quite reasonably) telling me to bog off, my editor told me to go back and try again; that she still believed there was a good story in that core concept, and she thought I could write it.
So I took that one-sentence idea apart properly, in all the ways I could think of. I thought about the problem of exposition, in telling a story that a character had lived through already. I thought about the idea of rewriting your own past from a sincere, unjokey perspective. What could possibly make you wish to erase months of your life, and risk erasing the good with the bad? What could make such a wish come true?
And the result is a book that is a little bit funny, every now and then, and the main character might get a boyfriend, kind of - but is really about real life, families, growing up, and working out what’s important.
I’m so glad I got to write it twice.
Ha ha, oh bless you, though I am intrigued by this Magical Digital Camera :)ReplyDelete
Finished Pea's B of BF yest while ill in bed and it cheered me up no end. Looking forward to reading about Bluebell too.
This is such a great post, as a fledgling wannabe writer it's always so interesting to hear about how established writers like you deal with these sorts of humps in the road!ReplyDelete
hahahaha!! That is great! I love how your editor believes in you! And the first one sounds hilarious, although I'll just have to believe you that it wasn't lol!ReplyDelete
Fantastic post, thank you so much Susie!ReplyDelete
Kissing! And Topshop! JUST MY KINDA BOOK, hahahah :) I NEED to see this!ReplyDelete